The content itself is mostly good, I have no issue at all with the story, but I had several issues otherwise. Namely, the rooms with the skeletons have conflicting text describing things. Some of the text makes it seem like there's 1 enemy, some makes it seem like there are two (using words like "both"). In the final chamber it describes the player receiving both a d6 and a d4 necrotic damage if they touch an item, both referring to the same item. Additionally, and this is probably the biggest error, the maps provided only show 1 sarcophagus in the fire and the ice rooms, but the screenshotted maps in the dungeon master's pdf of the adventure show 4, and refer to the player being able to gain extra treasure by looting the other 3 unopened sarcophagi. Overall the adventure is good but it comes across like the author is either English Second Language or didn't spend enough time proof reading. A final request for improvement would be to not have the room labels in the middle of the maps, instead putting them to the side so that they don't ruin immersion when using them on a virtual tabletop.
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